Dear Alice ,
I am writing to tell you my news. I had some romantic adventures I want to share with you.
Some months ago I met someone at a party called Tom . Tom fell in love with me . Every day he came to my house . He bought me flowers and he gave me expensive presents . He even asked me to marry him but I said 'No' . That day Tom left my house very upset . He thought about me all the time but I wasn't interested in him .
One day , I met Tom again , but this time he was with another woman called Sue . Then I understood that I made the biggest mistake of my life . I lost Tom and then I fell in love with him .
Please write soon and tell me what I can do with Tom .
Best wishes ,
Jane
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